Matt Bellamy

I hate it when someone writes a poem which gives me nothing to criticize. Telling you what's good is still helpful, aye? xD Well, I love the ending, the way ...

Firstly, all your it's should be its. It's is short for it is, and its means something belongs to it. This will be a winter, without snow, without Christmas. I ...

You sue big words! :P Well, more unusual than big really, which made this difficult for me to read, because I didn't really know what you were trying to say. ...

I really like this - it's very cute. I can't quite get my head around the first line, but it sounds so good that I don't mind. Maybe add a ...

Walking into the kitchen, where my mother's at. This sounds a little to informal. Like, "hey, where are my homies at?" I smile back and beam at her - using ...

Distingt to touch, though left unfelt; Distinct, you mean. A breath of life that keeps some sane; A fix; escape; it wakes the brain, pumping passion through your veins; the ...

I want my blue star, so any requests are greatly appreciated. *waits for the flood*

I’m trying to make it easier you know. I'd put a comma after easier. then when I loose myself away, Loose or lose? I'm not sure which you meant here. ...

I want to know you; --The use of a colon doesn't make much sense here. My hometown. My own body. --I would change this to My hometown, my own body, ...

Agreed, very nice detail in the last one, I love the colours and the different textures. Not particularly keen on the first one, I think the contrast and colour would ...

I love the face and the texture, the pencils work really well. I second what other people have said about the sea looking like it's sticking to him a bit, ...

Awesome stuff! :)

I need critiques for my story in Other Fiction!

I would really appreciate a critique for my new story: Thanks!

Ahh, I thought the medalist's stickers and the free stickers were two different things :P Silly me!